Ever get stuck trying
to write in a character's voice? When I started working on The Beat on Ruby's
Street, I could hear the main character Ruby very clearly. That was a good
thing because the narration is crafted from Ruby's point of view.
The other characters
were sometimes harder to pinpoint though-- much harder. One of the toughest
things writers have to do is create different voices for each character - and
that means knowing them really well.
Sometimes, I found, I
trip myself up by over thinking - and when I do that, every character almost
ALWAYS sounds the same if they're not the main character. To avoid tripping, I
started an exercise using three or four words to describe each character - just
to gain a head start on their voices and viewpoints.
Animal, vegetable or
mineral doesn't matter -- as long as you find the right words. And yes, this
can be mighty challenging.
Some examples:
Ruby: jazz and
black coffee
Sophie: quicksilver, glasses
Gordy: ivy, ladder, numbers
Nell-mom: persimmon and burgundy
Gary Daddy-o: bass, oranges
Sky: morning, beard
Blu:laughter, swimming, red hair
Levitt: tight skirt, buttons, notebook
Officer Flo: uniform, pudgy fingers
You get the idea - but
the phrases, of course, are just the beginning. The rest is up to you (and the
character, of course) - and fitting a character around his or her name is just
one way to go at it.
Once I have the name,
what the character wears, eats, says and does usually start appearing pretty
quickly. I also like to experiment with how each character talks and what they
might do on any given day.
Sometimes they might
appear “done” and ready to go, but usually they evolve, piece by piece and
slowly, as the story unfolds.
That’s how I work it,
anyway. And, so far, it’s worked for me. If you have a different way and want
to share it, that’s great too!
Illustration: Jackson O'Brien Muenster
Illustration: Jackson O'Brien Muenster
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